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Haikurumba
06-25-2004, 06:44 PM
This is a new thread
To be only in haiku
Do not violate

Skating is so great
It's like poetry on ice
I skate every day

What is it you like?
Is it the speed, the grace, or...
the fantastic hair?

Haicool
06-25-2004, 06:49 PM
Bingo! I say to
you, my man!! A thread only
for Haiku.... Fun! Fun!

Let's open this up
to anyone who wants to
chat about skating.

Moto Guzzi
06-25-2004, 07:00 PM
Two new posters here
With similar writing style.
Coincidence? No.

:)

Haikurumba
06-25-2004, 07:00 PM
For those who don't know
I will give you Haiku rules
It is quite easy

First, five syllables.
The second line has seven.
Then back down to five.

Have fun haiku friends
Once you start, you just can't stop.
Makes skating chat fun

Haicool
06-25-2004, 07:02 PM
Jeeze, five, seven, five?
Sounds like a challenge to me!
I love a challenge!

Oh, Moto Guzzi,
which discipline do you like
to watch on TV?

Is it Ladies, Mens,
high flying Pairs, or is it
beautiful Ice Dance?

Haikurumba
06-25-2004, 07:05 PM
Moto Guzzi man
you are cool, lets hope others,
join in all the fun.

Tapper
06-27-2004, 12:39 AM
The Figure skater
Floats, leaps, soars, spins, glides, flies, blurrs
Then stands in Stillness.

daisies
06-28-2004, 07:23 PM
Tapper, that was good
You are a Haiku master
Can't wait to read more

:)

Tapper
07-01-2004, 04:15 PM
Figure skaters are
graceful, bold risk-takers, like
Daisies in Winter.

skaternum
07-01-2004, 04:27 PM
Illusion is flesh
That wants to hide bras and scars
But makes you look dark.

skaternum
07-01-2004, 04:29 PM
Try to hold an edge
With blades as dull as Boyfriend.
Not easy, is it?

skaternum
07-02-2004, 08:20 AM
There is no response.
Are my haiku just too bad?
I will try harder. :cry:

Tapper
07-02-2004, 01:03 PM
Skaternum! practice
Patience! Your haiku is grand!
Humor is your gift!

BittyBug
07-02-2004, 02:24 PM
My dear skaternum
Sounds like you need a new man
But skating is fun

skaternum
07-02-2004, 03:18 PM
Hooray! I've been read.
I was starting to wonder.
I hope you write more.

My man is quite good.
I wrote that for a dear friend.
I hope she dumps him.

Tapper
07-02-2004, 03:30 PM
Dump her man? That's nice!
Especially on the ice!
Cold shoulder. Wet butt.

Haicool
07-03-2004, 12:00 AM
This is the best thread
ever! I am so glad you
are all taking part!

How 'bout a haiku
that tells where you live at the
present time. Sound good?

LittleBitSk8er
07-03-2004, 12:26 AM
Never have done a haiku
will do haiku just for you too
in Texas how 'bout you?



is this better?:)

lilwish
07-03-2004, 03:38 AM
MK gives me peace
fludid movement, lucid essence
lights my life and soul eternally




Is this a haku?

skaternum
07-03-2004, 07:31 AM
LittleBitSk8er,
you did not write a haiku.
It's five, seven, five.

John King
07-03-2004, 01:08 PM
There was young girl named Oksana

Who'd skate in a balletic manna

For the world to behold

She spun us a gold

And touched many hearts of a fana

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

There once was a dancer named Maya

Who set all our hearts on faya

With Evgeny in tow

They scored a 6-0

Triumphed in the kiss 'n crya :P

Haicool
07-07-2004, 03:41 PM
Oh boy! A limerick!!!
But, written in the wrong thread...
'lil Irish bast*rd!!

Leela
07-07-2004, 04:12 PM
Waiting at the boards
Skaters ready to compete.
Exciting moment.